AMAZON WOMEN
- Gardening in the Tropics, sometimes
- you come across these strong Amazon
- women striding across our lands 鈥
- like Toeyza who founded the Wori-
- shiana nation of female warriors
- in the mountains of Parima 鈥 of whom
- the missionary Brett and Sir Walter
- Raleigh wrote. Though nobody believed
- them, I myself could tell a tale or two
- (though nothing as exotic as the story
- of Toeyza and her lover Walyarima who
- swam the river disguised as a black
- jaguar whenever he visited her). Now
- we've got that out of the way let me
- hasten to say I'm not into sensationalism,
- I merely wished to set the record
- straight by averring that the story
- of Amazon women might have begun
- because when the warriors went away
- 鈥 to war or voyages 鈥 it was the
- women who kept the gardens going
- and sometimes if the men were not
- heard from again (as occasionally
- happened) they banded together and
- took up arms to defend the territory.
- So somebody 鈥 like Cristobal Col贸n
- or Sir Walter Raleigh 鈥 could have
- come along and heard these (marvellous)
- tales of (fabulous) lands full of
- (pure) gold and fierce (untamed,
- exotic) women (you know how men stay!).
- And the rest (as they say) is history.
- Mark you, the part about Toeyza's
- husband sending her and the other
- women to gather cassava for a feast
- while he ambushed and killed her lover
- is true (at least, my auntie says so
- and her husband's uncle's grandfather
- told him as a fact 鈥 and he got it
- from someone who knew). I don't know
- about you but the part I find
- disgusting is that while they were
- away, the husband (the chief at that)
- skinned and hung the lover up
- in the women's hut as a lesson
- to faithless wives. (Though if men
- go around in jaguar disguise, what
- can they expect?) If you ask me,
- that husband got what was coming
- (poisoned by bitter cassava juice
- mixed in with the beer) though
- I can't see what the rest of the men
- did to deserve equal treatment.
- But that Toeyza (with liberated words)
- led all the wives in flight and they
- managed (despite pursuit) to fight
- their way across the jungle to the
- heights and freedom in their own
- nation which ever since has been
- justly celebrated as the Land of
- the Amazon. The best part (I hear)
- is that they allow men to visit them
- once a year. Boy children they send
- back to the land of their fathers,
- girls they keep to rear (though
- I'm not sure I would want my girl
- raised by a band of women outlaws
- keeping company with jaguars). But
- you see my trial! I'm here gossiping
- about things I never meant to air
- for nobody could say I'm into
- scandal. I wanted to tell of noble women
- like Nanny the Maroon queen mother
- or the fair Anacaona, Taino
- chieftainess who was brutally
- slain by the colonists, or of
- the Carib women whom the said Col贸n
- relied on for navigation
- through the islands. I hadn't meant
- to tell tall tale or repeat exotic
- story for that's not my style.
- But we all have to make a living
- and there's no gain in telling stories
- about ordinary men and women.
- Then again, when gardening
- in the Tropics, every time you lift
- your eyes from the ground
- you see sights that strain your
- credulity 鈥 like those strong
- Amazon Women striding daily across
- our lands carrying bundles of wood
- on their heads and babies strapped
- to their breasts and calabashes of
- water in both hands.
Annotations to the Poem
(prepared by Olive Senior)
7-8] missionary Brett and Sir Walter Raleigh: two Englishmen who helped to propagate the legend of the Amazon women. The Rev. William Henry Brett was an Anglican missionary who travelled the interior of Guyana in the nineteenth century and published two books on the legends of the Guyanese people. He also translated part of the Bible into the Arawak language. Sir Walter Raleigh is a seventeenth-century explorer who led two expeditions to the Orinoco in search of gold. He also spread the story of Amazon women in the Americas.
26] Cristobal Col贸n: Spanish name of Christopher Columbus whose diaries and letters about the New World are full of fantastical and legendary stories.
73] Nanny the Maroon queen mother: a Maroon leader in Jamaica in the eighteenth century who is now one of the country鈥檚 official National Heroes.
74] the fair Anacaona: a Ta铆no leader who was brutally murdered by the Spaniards.
Commentary
Written by Denise deCaires Narain, University of Sussex
鈥淎mazon Women鈥 is one of twelve poems in the 鈥淕ardening in the Tropics鈥 section of the collection of that name. In this poem, as in several others in this section, the speaker uses the phrase 鈥済ardening in the tropics鈥 as a disarming opening gambit that invites the reader to share the speaker鈥檚 reflections on a topic that she appears to stumble upon. The speakers in the poems in this section are presented as ordinary people whose gardening activities are part of the business of 鈥渕aking life鈥 in the Caribbean where small-scale market gardening was historically a crucial aspect of survival for enslaved peoples. In 鈥淎mazon Women,鈥 the speaker suggests that in the innocent act of gardening, she has 鈥渃ome across鈥 the mythical Amazonian women; and, in the process, Senior deftly implies continuities between post-slavery garden plots and pre-Columbian small-scale agricultural practices. The poem opens:
Gardening in the tropics, sometimes
you come across these strong Amazon
women striding across our lands 鈥
(lines 1-3)
鈥淕ardening in the tropics鈥 operates here as a playful pretext for the reconsideration of these monumental female figures of History and myth. The poem offers a retelling of the story of Toeyza, a Worishiana woman whose dalliance with her lover, Walyarima, incited her husband to kill him as a lesson to all wives. Rather than obey this lesson, Toeyza leads the other women through the jungle where they, in Senior鈥檚 words, establish 鈥渢heir own/ nation which ever since has been / justly celebrated as the Land of/ the Amazon鈥 (lines 58-61).
Read More...Senior鈥檚 poem engages with the familiar story of an exclusively female community of Amazonian women in interesting ways, drawing attention to and recalibrating the sensationalist elements of these stories while also retaining and re-circulating aspects of that very sensationalism. It is clear from the outset in the direct reference to Brett (an English missionary who worked for many decades in Guiana) and Sir Walter Raleigh that specific historical resources are being drawn upon; and, indeed, Senior鈥檚 annotations to the poem provided above confirm these details. The speaker, while hastening to remind her audience that she is 鈥渘ot into sensationalism鈥 (line 15), retells the bare bones of the story so that it is sensational. But this sensationalism is qualified by the wry commentary the speaker offers on these extraordinary events. She is disgusted that the husband skinned and hung his wife鈥檚 lover up for the other wives to see, but it is the addition of the bracketed aside that the husband is 鈥(a chief at that)鈥 (line 43) that deftly aligns the extraordinary with the ordinary, the fabulous with the everyday. Similarly, the exotic potential of Walyarima crossing the river disguised as a jaguar to visit Toeyza is deflated by the comment: 鈥(Though if men/ go around in jaguar disguise, what/ can they expect?)鈥 (lines 46-48).
Senior鈥檚 strategy here might be read as enacting Edward Said鈥檚 idea of the 鈥渃ontrapuntal鈥 in its alertness to the ways that smaller histories (and quieter voices) interrupt and snag dominant narratives of History. The opening stanzas of William Henry Brett鈥檚 poetically rendered account of the genesis of the South American Amazons demonstrate the heroic, exoticizing tone that Senior鈥檚 text draws on, reworks, and resists:
Of the fierce 鈥淲orisiana鈥
(Such their nation鈥檚 name)
I can tell the ancient story:
How their warlike strength and glory
First began in shame.
For a chieftain鈥檚 wife, 鈥淭o-eyza,鈥
Faithless dared to be,
Caring nothing for disaster;
Haughty was her lord and master,
Haughtier was she.
(鈥淥rigin of the Amazons鈥180)
Brett鈥檚 speaker narrates, with a knowing assurance, a perspective that the regular stanzaic structure and rhyme scheme consolidates. Senior鈥檚 poem is written in free verse that is punctuated by bracketed asides, exclamations, and interruptions; and its poetic qualities are much more covertly embedded (in internal rhymes and choice of words, for example). The declamatory mode of address that characterizes Brett鈥檚 account signals a rhetorical oral quality that does not anticipate interruption. While Senior鈥檚 poem is similarly oral and declamatory, it anticipates, welcomes, and pre-empts interruptions, frequently hailing the listener/reader directly. The speaker makes use of vernacular Jamaican idiom in several places鈥攆or example in 鈥(you know how men stay!)鈥漣n line 31 and in 鈥淏ut/ you see my trial!鈥 in lines 68-69鈥攖o establish an intimate mode of address and to appeal directly to the reader/listener as someone who shares a similar worldview and values. In doing so, the speaker seeks to establish her position as an ordinary but respectable member of the community whose opinions should be trusted. Senior鈥檚 speaker cunningly deploys wit and humour to establish the sense that the views she expresses are widely held, familiar, and uncontentious. The frequent use of asides consolidates the sense of a shared cultural terrain and invites consensus, as in 鈥(you know how men stay!)鈥 and 鈥淚 don鈥檛 know/ about you but 鈥︹ (lines 40-41).
Senior uses respectability1 strategically in 鈥淎mazon Women,鈥 as she does in many of her poems, particularly in ways that allow her to inscribe resistance to dominant cultures in a quieter register than is more usually associated with Caribbean poetry (in the work of Louise Bennett, Kamau Brathwaite, or Linton Kwesi Johnson, for example). The understatement and self-deprecation that characterize many of Senior鈥檚 speakers allow them to figure resistance in cunningly sinuous ways; like Anansi the trickster, they insinuate rather than proclaim their subversive tactics and, as a result, often seem 鈥渢o have their cake and eat it too.鈥 So although the speaker in 鈥淎mazon Women鈥 asserts early on that her purpose is to 鈥渟et the record/ straight鈥 (lines 16-17) by explaining the origins of Amazonian women-only groups in more practical terms (as maintaining the gardens while the men were away), she spends more time on the sensational myths than on the practicalities, and her account includes an unapologetic celebration of Amazon women. The poem concludes by suggesting that there are historical continuities between powerful mythical women figures (Toeyza; Anacaona (a Taino woman-leader brutally slain by the Spanish); Carib women who helped Columbus to navigate; and Nanny of the Maroons) and the strength displayed by ordinary Caribbean women everywhere who toil every day to sustain their families. The celebration of this varied feminist genealogy is an important one for it emphasizes powerful connections between Amerindian women and the African-Jamaican leader Nanny in relation to contemporary Caribbean women鈥檚 lived realities. In so doing, it also quietly affirms an indigenous lineage of feminism that is embedded in Amerindian myths as a source of power that informs African Caribbean feminist solidarity, a trajectory that bypasses the usual narrative that feminism originated in the West.2
The obviously feminist agenda of the poem is mediated by the speaker鈥檚 tone which is coyly dissembling, simultaneously declaring and disavowing its challenge to the reader. After commenting admiringly on the gender segregation of Toeyza鈥檚 community of women where boy babies are sent back to 鈥渢he land of their fathers鈥 (line 64), the speaker qualifies her position with another bracketed aside: 鈥(though/ I鈥檓 not sure I would want my girl/ raised by a band of women outlaws/ keeping company with jaguars)鈥 (lines 65-68). It is this playful shuttling between avowal and disavowal, between the ordinary and the extraordinary, and between varied registers (the literary and the colloquial tenor of gossip) that allows the poem to domesticate the mythical/historical material it draws upon. In doing so, Senior鈥檚 poem does not simply repeat the frequently reiterated truism that the pre-Columbian peoples of the Americas were 鈥渆xterminated鈥 but works actively to allow these cultures to resonate in, and inform, contemporary Caribbean understandings of itself.
The final section of the poem consolidates the sense of fluid navigation across time, landscape, and register that I am arguing distinguishes the poem under discussion and many of the poems in the 鈥淕ardening in the Tropics鈥 section. In a similar manner as with Senior鈥檚 knowing use of a word loaded with exotic freight as is 鈥渢ropics,鈥 鈥淎mazon Women鈥 a culturally loaded choice. This is made clear in the wry way that Senior lists the expectations of men like Columbus or Raleigh, who find just what they expected, having heard 鈥(marvellous)/ tales of (fabulous) lands full of/ (pure) gold and fierce (untamed,/ exotic) women鈥 (lines 28-31). In Imperial Leather: Race, Gender, and Sexuality in the Colonial Contest, Anne McClintock makes reference to a 鈥渓ong tradition of male travel as an erotics of ravishment鈥 and to places like the New World/Americas as 鈥減orno-tropics for the European imagination鈥 (22). Senior鈥檚 poem clearly references this exoticizing and eroticizing projection. Alert to the possibility that she, too, may risk being complicit with a 鈥減orno-tropical鈥 imaginary, the speaker interrupts her own narration:
But
you see my trial! I鈥檓 here gossiping
about things I never meant to air
for nobody could say I鈥檓 into
scandal.
摆鈥
鈥 I hadn鈥檛 meant
to tell tall tale or repeat exotic
story for that鈥檚 not my style.
But we all have to make a living
And there鈥檚 no gain in telling stories
成人大片 ordinary men and women.
(lines 68-84)
Here the speaker acknowledges the powerful lure of the scandalous and exotic for everyone, everywhere鈥攁s well as the practical realities of making a living for the poet and story-teller. Having made the above declaration, the poem shifts again鈥 鈥淭hen again, when gardening/ in the Tropics, every time you lift/ your eyes from the ground/ you see sights that strain your/ credulity 鈥撯(lines 85-89)鈥攁nd closes with an image of Amazon women 鈥渟triding daily across/ our lands鈥 (lines 90-91) performing the everyday labour of many women everywhere: carrying babies, wood, and water. Once again, Senior deftly welds together the ordinary and the extraordinary as mirror images of each other. And, 鈥渢hen again,鈥 in reminding the listener/reader of the speaker鈥檚 location in the garden, the poem closes with an image of the speaker-poet tilling (and 鈥渞eading鈥) the soil as if it were an archive that, with patient labour, will release its buried treasure of stories鈥攕tories that will allow those of Raleigh, Columbus, Brett and others housed in that more canonical archive to resonate in more mischievously promiscuous ways. Senior鈥檚 self-deprecating, respectable woman-speaker, then, is deployed as a figure whose very understated ordinary-ness allows her resistance to 鈥減ass鈥 while she runs amok rifling through the formal archive and creating a new one.
Notes
1 Senior鈥檚 texts frequently engage with and challenge ideas of 鈥渞espectability鈥 as a set of values and conventions that articulate 鈥減roper鈥 female identity. Peter Wilson鈥檚 Crab Antics: The Social Anthropology of English-Speaking Negro Societies of the Caribbean controversially and problematically opposed the conventional association of women with 鈥渞espect鈥 (via the church, home, use of standard English, and bourgeois values of decorum and honesty) to that of 鈥渞eputation鈥 (associated with the male culture of the street, Creole culture, and flamboyant display). Senior鈥檚 work challenges this neatly gendered binary opposition to suggest that respectability can be deployed strategically to great effect. See my discussion of this in Olive Senior (3-4) and Michael Bucknor鈥檚 鈥淪ounding off: performing ritual revolt in Olive Senior鈥檚 鈥楳editiation on Yellow.鈥欌
2 See 鈥淎mazonia,鈥 a bronze and mahogany sculpture by Jasmine Thomas-Girvan that was directly inspired by this feminist sentiment in Senior鈥檚 poem at
http://www.normangirvan.info/wp-content/uploads/2011/12/jasmine-catalogue-20111.pdf.
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Brett, William Henry. 鈥淥rigin of the Amazons (An Ancient Legend of the Inland
Mountain Tribes).鈥 Legends and Myths of the Aboriginal Indians of British
Guiana. London: William Wells Gardner,1880. 180-87. Print.
Bucknor, Michael. 鈥淪ounding off: performing ritual revolt in Olive Senior鈥檚
鈥淢editation on Yellow.鈥 Mosaic 42.2 (2009): 55-71. Print.
deCaires Narain, Denise. Olive Senior. Tavistock, UK: Northcote House, 2011.
McClintock, Anne. Imperial Leather: Race, Gender, and Sexuality in the Colonial
Contest. Routledge, 1995. Print.
Said, Edward. Culture and Imperialism. New York: Alfred A. Knopf, 1993. Print.
Wilson, Peter. Crab Antics: The Social Anthropology of English-Speaking Negro
Societies of the Caribbean. Yale University Press, 1973. Print.